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    dots Submission Name: Put it all on medots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 5/117/132
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    dotsPut it all on medots
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    Put all your hate on me.
    Take all your anger out on me.
    Let me shoulder all of your pain.
    Let me take all of the darkness inside you.
    I can feel no more pain than i already do,
    I have already reached the pinnacle.
    Let me hold your burden.
    Lessen the hatred.
    Lessen the anger.
    Lessen your pain.
    Put it all on me,
    And then you will feel better.
    Then you will feel happiness again.
    I have already lost all of mine.
    I may have back one day,
    But for now.
    Put it all on me.




    Submitted on 2013-09-29 21:14:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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