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    dots Submission Name: Warriordots
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    Author: DeathTone
    ASL Info:    32 / Male / United States
    Elite Ratio:    5.54 - 81/55/30
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 494
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    dotsWarriordots
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    I'm a warrior who can't be played
    With fierce action you got slayed
    You thought you could knock me down
    Bitch I will always pick my self off the ground
    You can't stop me no matter how hard you try
    Even with all of you fake ass lies
    You made me real mad
    So it's time for me to turn bad
    I brought out what I should have not
    I prepaired an evil plot
    Now the world must suffer because of you
    With out lube you I will screw
    See ya soon
    When we're alone in a room
    I will come from the front
    And smoke you like a blunt
    See what you say then
    Fake ass friend




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