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    dots Submission Name: sadness and tearsdots
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    Author: DeathTone
    ASL Info:    32 / Male / United States
    Elite Ratio:    5.54 - 81/55/30
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Tears run down my face
    And drip all over the place
    I made a choice based on the past
    About something I wish could last
    It's ashame that I sit and cry
    Because ur love for me was a lie
    I wanted so bad to say yes
    And I'm under emotional stress
    My choice was not easy to make
    Because I'm not sure if ur sincere or fake
    I'm happy with my life as it stands
    But when ur around I unravel like loose strands
    U don't even know how bad I hurt over u
    I never lied and was always true
    I'm sorry I had to be strong
    I pray u will be okay before long
    I never wanted this to end
    But my heart had to eventually mend
    Just know I still miss what we had
    I'm just still hurt and mad
    Good luck in life cause I wish u the best
    Now my heart can truly rest




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