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    dots Submission Name: I AM MENSCHdots

    Author: Joneromensch
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    dotsI AM MENSCHdots

    Times wen u don't no exactly how you feel
    N peeps don't say d words 2 help you heal
    Besties and frends seem 2 havE balled
    U feel like tis d end of d world

    Well tis not, its just one more trial
    Dat you have to face
    Nobody sed u sud run
    U cud reduce Ur pace

    U must crawl b4 u walk
    And u must walk b4 u fly
    No more pityful talk
    And no more time to cry

    Dis is me sayin no
    To d tins dat weigh me down
    Frm now on I will go
    D extra mile ahead of town

    Go ahead and try to stop me

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