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    dots Submission Name: It Hurts My Heartdots
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    Author: wheatstraw
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/3/5
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       Me and my boyfriend of 25 months broke up because it went tothe worst. I love him and always will and hope he comes back.


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    dotsIt Hurts My Heartdots
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    To look at u it breaks my heart,
    I can't show no pain as it don't hurt me.
    It kills me inside
    To see you with someone else,
    But I tell you im happy
    And will love someone else.
    I feel like Ur supposed to be mine,
    Mine and no one else's
    But I move on
    And try to ignore the feelings.
    Only time will tell if you ever come back
    A part of me hopes and a part of me wants to move on.
    I will forever love you
    And I hope u do the same.
    I hope your happy with someone else
    No matter how much it hurts me
    The best revenge ever
    Is to let her have you.




    Submitted on 2013-09-30 18:40:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I write what I feel. Lol!
    | Posted on 2013-09-30 00:00:00 | by wheatstraw | [ Reply to This ]
      very emotional
    | Posted on 2013-09-30 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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