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    dots Submission Name: forever minedots
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    Author: wheatstraw
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/3/5
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsforever minedots
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    You lift me up
    Into the Sky's so clear,
    Baby I need u here
    Forever and near.
    You make me feel complete
    And stronger for who I am,
    You taught me to love uncontrollably
    And be respectful of who I am.
    You make me a greater person
    You let the love shine through,
    To have you day and night,
    To forever call you mine.




    Submitted on 2013-09-30 19:15:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You Tird butt! Lol! Love u! <3
    | Posted on 2013-10-01 00:00:00 | by wheatstraw | [ Reply to This ]
      AWWWW SHANE! :)
    | Posted on 2013-09-30 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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