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    dots Submission Name: up all night, got demons to fight.dots
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    Author: SetmyselfonFire
    Elite Ratio:    2.83 - 41/55/47
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       venting my heavy heart.


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    dotsup all night, got demons to fight.dots
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    Deep into the hours after midnight strikes
    my heart aches vastly, anxiety's alive
    Its heavy steel shoes stomp down on my chest
    like this is just a grave and it wont let my heart rest.
    When your broken, you do your best to pick yourself up
    Pull yourself together, let all doubt eat your dust
    3am..4am...the wrong time for this beer.
    but Im hellbent on holding on, when noone can see my tears.
    I reminisce of all the ways I loved and used to laugh
    I let myself miss all the things I know I wont get back.
    Ill fall asleep with woe and sorrow on my mind
    but in the morning its just madness
    and Ill go on like all is right.




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      I know that feeling

    When the sun rises, it feels so surreal when you are going through something like that

    Good flow

    | Posted on 2013-10-05 00:00:00 | by nolram | [ Reply to This ]


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