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    dots Submission Name: Stressed Outdots
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    Author: wheatstraw
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/3/5
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       I am taking a college level CNA class in high school and with all my other classes and trying 2 work to make enough money to get by, my parents expect me to be able to do it all but its hard and very stressful.


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    dotsStressed Outdots
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    The pain and the hurt
    It kills me inside,
    To deal with all this stress
    And what people expect from me.
    Dealing with school and work,
    Making money for car payments and gas
    While having hours of study each night
    Its not as easy as you think
    It can take a toll on you.
    I just want a break from all this stress
    To cuddle in his arms and stay every day
    By his side to help him out,
    And when I need help
    he'll help me out.
    I wanna be with you right now
    To relax and enjoy your smile,
    Ur the best way to relax
    And make it through this stressful time.




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