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    dots Submission Name: Gonedots
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    Author: wheatstraw
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/3/5
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsGonedots
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    We used to be close,
    Closer than imaginable.
    But now anymore,
    We're farther than ever before.
    You used to be at family events,
    And the family has always supported you.
    But now you stabbed us all in the back
    And act like we don't exist anymore.
    You act like you don't want anything to do with us,
    Don't wanna treat us the same.
    So since you treat us poorly,
    We'll act like you ain't family anymore.
    I wish things could be the same,
    How we used to be,
    I wish you would be there for me
    Like you used to be.
    You make me wanna cry,
    You make me wanna scream to the world,
    You need to open up your eyes
    And see what you've done to the family now.
    I guess I should say goodbye,
    Not worry about you anymore.
    I don't wanna deal with the pain
    I wanna forget and move on.




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