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    dots Submission Name: Cyclingdots
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    Author: lolaxelmo
    ASL Info:    23/F/IA
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 34/37/38
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsCyclingdots
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    we go through the cycles
    fill through the heart one by one until the placement is just
    ego sways the feeling—a type of blockage
    disavowing love instead leads to filing down,
    eroding without allowing time, a quiet rejection
    and I’m still wondering about that moment—
    technology filled through blue glowing screens
    lighting up the evening-dark room—
    the words filtered through the distance
    seen by other’s eyes the confession
    and it is opposite of the remembered




    Submitted on 2013-10-03 12:04:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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