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    dots Submission Name: small worlds (for gabby)dots

    Author: trinityfinger
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    dotssmall worlds (for gabby)dots

    we've hurt a thousand lifetimes already,
    my hurt versus your hurt versus the entire
    world cocooned from the sun that i hold in
    my hands, this treasure of smell and taste
    and forgiveness just out of reach, out of anger
    misplaced and words i can never take back.

    how to heal when there is only a void,
    repercussions upon repercussions
    within an emptiness i will always feel,
    this divinity i will always touch and share,
    this drowning vista of undreamt dreams
    and unformed stolen happiness.


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