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    dots Submission Name: The truthdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/132
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsThe truthdots
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    So you finally reveal the truth,
    Even if you don't know it.
    You've been lying to me all this time..
    Never truly thinking about my feelings.
    You don't know how much that hurts,
    How much that stings,
    How much i feel like i don't belong here anymore.
    If only you could see it all,
    If only you could see my pain,
    If only you actually cared about me.




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