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Let It Rain

Author: Rhettawolf
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Words: 68
Class/Type: Poetry /Trapped
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Let It Rain

Let it rain. Down on my soul.
Let it howl. Sing me a song.
Let me cry. Sometimes life's a hideous ghoul.

Watch me try. Don't judge upon me now.
Watch me lie. Everything to preserve the truth.
Watch me run. Away from the scorn.

Let it rain. Because it's calming now.
Let it howl. No one will know.
Let me cry. My life is free.

Submitted on 2013-10-04 10:55:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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