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    dots Submission Name: Been on here awhiledots
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    Author: nolram
    ASL Info:    29/M
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 58/61/33
    Words: 268
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBeen on here awhiledots
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    Watched my life change in so many ways
    and yet I find myself in the same damn place
    I'm more open now
    but what does it mean if we all lose in the end?
    Maybe it's not losing
    Maybe it's transcendence

    If transcendence was the loneliness of realizing you have a bunch of shitty poems from your early twenties floating in space from a time before spelling was autocorrected by the medium at hand

    Yes Elite Skills, I am calling you out

    I never made many friends on here
    But it's not all your fault
    I was too damn closed off
    Today is the day things change
    Here, there, everywhere
    The deranged teen is in control of his expression and more wildly deranged inside than ever before

    Watch out!

    I know myself better, now
    And even if this life is a shit show circling a drain eternally until we expire, all memory is lost, gone without a trace, I'm going to spend it letting people know who the hell I am, and getting to know myself and learning to love myself because, dammit, I am not gonna carry my working class scars into the fucking afterlife

    I want to dwell on the past, but I can't
    That seems like a luxury to me
    Yeah, I think about the past sometimes
    I get nostalgic
    But I push forward
    Because
    Before we know,
    so unbelievable
    Before we know
    seriously
    Before we know

    It will all be over


    I'm ready to live at last

    Come at me




    Submitted on 2013-10-05 07:01:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ill be your friend :)
    | Posted on 2013-11-10 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice sentiment. Have a good day.
    | Posted on 2013-10-05 00:00:00 | by Esophagus1 | [ Reply to This ]


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