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    dots Submission Name: Do Unto Othersdots
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    Author: Esophagus1
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 231/279/149
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Call. Call out into the dark.
    Hear what you may.
    A fish out of water
    Swimming with sharks.

    The downward spiral surfacing
    Insurrection of self. Ignorance slain.
    The energy of gravity.
    The dance of depravity.
    All things in place we play
    Play along to the tune of
    What we know and understand
    turning against us
    rearing its fangs upon us.
    For blood it craves
    and blood it demands.

    Hark! Harken to the dark.
    The resolute end in hand
    all do as they can to be free
    but without eyes will never see

    The downward spiral surfacing.
    Denial of self. A question inside itself.
    The clockwork of existance.
    The bane of resistance.
    Play what you will
    as it should be played around you.
    Never to turn against us.
    Vengeance all it tastes of us.
    It's blood spilt
    and we are made whole.

    Do unto others as you will
    that others should do unto you.




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