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The Wolf Inside

Author: Rhettawolf
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I hope other Shifters and werewolves can relate.

The Wolf Inside

Who am I?
Am I the girl I know and feel
Or the beast inside?

I see the blood
I hear the crunch.
I feel that angry hunger fire up my veins.

I see the plate, I see the fork
I hear the rhythmic chewing.
I feel satisfaction roll off my tongue.

As I lap at the crystal pond
I wonder if this will go on.
As a wolf forever on?

As I sit, human, almost whole
I wonder if this will go on.
As a girl forever on?

It's all very confusing.
Sometimes I want to hurl.
Mostly I want to run, but not away.

I love the wolf.
But sometimes I can't say the same about the girl.
Merciless laughter, poking, THEIR fun. Not mine.

Tonight I will run.
Tonight I will feast.
Tonight I will be free.

But every time
I ask myself.
Who am I?

Am I the girl I know and feel
Or am I the beast inside.
Perhaps I'll never know.

Submitted on 2013-10-05 18:59:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I very well can...the constant gnaw at your stomach to run? Ya. I get it.
| Posted on 2013-10-09 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]

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