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    dots Submission Name: The Wolf Insidedots
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    Author: Rhettawolf
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 6/6/17
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Poetry/Me
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       I hope other Shifters and werewolves can relate.


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    dotsThe Wolf Insidedots
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    Who am I?
    Am I the girl I know and feel
    Or the beast inside?

    I see the blood
    I hear the crunch.
    I feel that angry hunger fire up my veins.

    I see the plate, I see the fork
    I hear the rhythmic chewing.
    I feel satisfaction roll off my tongue.

    As I lap at the crystal pond
    I wonder if this will go on.
    As a wolf forever on?

    As I sit, human, almost whole
    I wonder if this will go on.
    As a girl forever on?

    It's all very confusing.
    Sometimes I want to hurl.
    Mostly I want to run, but not away.

    I love the wolf.
    But sometimes I can't say the same about the girl.
    Merciless laughter, poking, THEIR fun. Not mine.

    Tonight I will run.
    Tonight I will feast.
    Tonight I will be free.

    But every time
    I ask myself.
    Who am I?

    Am I the girl I know and feel
    Or am I the beast inside.
    Perhaps I'll never know.







    Submitted on 2013-10-05 18:59:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I very well can...the constant gnaw at your stomach to run? Ya. I get it.
    | Posted on 2013-10-09 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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