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    dots Submission Name: Burning Starsdots
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    Author: raspberry89
    Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 5/18/22
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsBurning Starsdots
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    How active the stars
    How different the days
    We’ve found what’s ours
    In a universe ablaze
    Basking at balls of fire
    Reveling under auroras
    How the heavens inspire
    We feel an aura
    Wishing on burning rock
    Praying to ancient light
    Time ticks away on the clock
    How glorious the sight




    Submitted on 2013-10-06 13:20:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You might want to look up the definition of basking your context is a little off.
    | Posted on 2013-10-07 00:00:00 | by LiamBHershtale | [ Reply to This ]


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