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    dots Submission Name: You'll be alonedots
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    Author: nolram
    ASL Info:    29/M
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 58/61/32
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsYou'll be alonedots
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    In the end you'll be alone
    yeah, it doesn't seem right
    yeah, it's an insult to everything you stood for
    no, there's no way around it
    there are some things you gotta do by yourself
    like living and dying
    no one is gonna show you the way
    with tons of fear and trepidation I ask, WHY?
    All I wanted was some guidance
    But instead of answers I get a pain in the chest and growing madness
    lit by the dim lights of a hand me down laptop left behind by a lost love
    Thanks for nothing
    I can be everything to everyone
    nothing to someone
    Everyone in the world could know who I am
    but it's all so fucking meaningless
    if I'm still all so twisted regarding who I am and how I feel about myself
    So I guess that's my new mission
    To be alone and to know where I stand
    So I don't end up walking for eternity
    in circles looking for an exit that doesn't exist




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      This really spoke to me. I honestly read this and got shivers down my spine, very well done. It speaks brilliantly to the plight all of us face, but none of us want to think about; the inevitability of it all, the point blank fact that we all face death, and we face it alone. This piece screams for something, and damn if I can't put my finger on what it is... But it definitely provokes thought and emotion. Kudos to you, my friend. Well done. Thanks for sharing, and keep writing!
    | Posted on 2013-10-08 00:00:00 | by TheSnoitart | [ Reply to This ]


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