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    dots Submission Name: Graveyarddots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/132
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsGraveyarddots
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    This place is my eternal resting place,
    and i was quickly forgotten by all.
    No mourning for my lack existence.
    No sadness for me dying.
    No caring for my passing.
    No anger for who did this to me.
    Instead you feel happiness,
    You feel this way is better.
    This earth is happier without me.
    This earth is better off without me.
    This earth is your playground,
    but for me...
    This place is nothing more
    Than my graveyard.




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