Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: I'm Hurting Insidedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Rhettawolf
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 6/6/17
    Words: 212
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
    Total Views: 683
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1368



    Description:
       I was treated like a contagious sickness by someone I thought I could trust. Life lesson learned: Don't trust anyone you with a secret they can't handle.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsI'm Hurting Insidedots
    -------------------------------------------


    The pain when you get rejected
    is worse than getting shot in the foot.
    Rejected... neglected...
    those things of the sort.

    "Be who you are."
    That's what they all say.
    But I can't help being me.
    I'm sorry I'm a beast.

    Should I lie?
    Tell them I faked?
    No... no time.
    I screwed up, I've been baked.

    It's not a disease.
    Not a condition.
    It's not some big imagined up prediction.
    It's who I am. This is me. Don't tell I can't be who I wanna be.

    A wolf is a pack animal.
    As am I.
    If you leave me
    I'm already dead inside.

    My friend was understanding
    believing, best as can be.
    But then I spilled.
    I told her the truth. Now I'm mental to her. An outcast, a joke.

    It's not my fault I am who I am!
    Sometimes a wolf is just who I am...
    If you don't want to talk to me anymore, I really don't give a damn fuck.
    Just mind your own business from now on.

    But I hope your happy.
    Because now I'm hurting inside.
    It's like a part of my pack has rejected me.
    I hope your glad I'm hurting inside.





    Submitted on 2013-10-07 18:07:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    198010

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Gaia written by endlessgame23
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    Starseed written by endlessgame23
    Rooted in Nature written by Chelebel
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    Keep written by TheStillSilence
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    Meaningless Meanings written by ForgottenGraves
    The World written by jjd
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    Untitled written by Daniel Barlow
    In a Corner written by jeniecel
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    Lie back & tan written by Daniel Barlow
    FamiliarDemons ©™ written by kyserin
    Whispered written by endlessgame23
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    going,,,"Skin." written by teika5
    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness
    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    Verse: written by Daniel Barlow
    Night- time written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry