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Author: Teofila
ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 210 /104 /71
Words: 104
Class/Type: Poetry /Mirror or Mask
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You Say

You say you still care about me.
Do you really?
Its not shown
Or at least not to me.
You say you still love me.
Are you sure?
I don't see it,
Nobody does.
You say you still need me.
Do you think so?
I don't because I know
You'll do fine on your own.
You say you know how I feel.
What are you thinking?
Nobody can possibly know
The pain I feel.
You say you know who I am.
Who do you think you are?
You know nothing about me
Just what I want you to see.
The façade,
This is me...

Submitted on 2013-10-08 21:53:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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