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    dots Submission Name: You Saydots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Mirror or Mask
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    dotsYou Saydots
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    You say you still care about me.
    Do you really?
    Its not shown
    Or at least not to me.
    You say you still love me.
    Are you sure?
    I don't see it,
    Nobody does.
    You say you still need me.
    Do you think so?
    I don't because I know
    You'll do fine on your own.
    You say you know how I feel.
    What are you thinking?
    Nobody can possibly know
    The pain I feel.
    You say you know who I am.
    Who do you think you are?
    You know nothing about me
    Just what I want you to see.
    The fa├žade,
    This is me...




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