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    dots Submission Name: understandingdots
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    Author: Robins
    Elite Ratio:    0.6 - 0/2/5
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       she thinks she understands me


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    dotsunderstandingdots
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    I had a girl we were great
    but she lied and I didn't
    know till it was to late
    then she left me like
    trash on the side of
    the road and she
    wants to be friends
    but she don't even
    realize what she
    has done to me
    so now I am alone
    and maybe at one point
    she might realize how
    much she hurt me till
    then she will never
    understand me
    and how she made
    me feel and she lie about how she
    felt but I guess that is obvious now but if she comes crying to me i will be there to help her even though she can never help me I will help her if she needs it




    Submitted on 2013-10-08 23:47:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I had a girl,
    We were great,
    She lied,
    But I didn't know,
    Til' it was too late,
    Then she left me,
    Like trash,
    On the side of the road,
    She want to be friends,
    But doesn't even know,
    What she has done to me,
    Now I'm alone,
    At one point maybe,
    she'll realize,
    How much she hurt me,
    Until then,
    She will never understand,
    Me and how she made me feel,
    And she lies about how she felt,
    Now I guess,
    Its obvious,
    If she comes crying,
    I'll be there to help,
    Although shell never be able,
    To do the same for me,
    I will help her,
    If help is what she needs...

    I think this would work a little better but dude in the end you sound whipped as hell.
    | Posted on 2013-10-09 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]

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