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    dots Submission Name: My Leafdots
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    Author: TheSnoitart
    ASL Info:    19/ M/ USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 53/64/52
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMy Leafdots
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    I search for meaning
    Among the drying leaves of fall
    And find myself reflected
    in that brittle, dying surface.

    Those empty veins
    Bled out from their brief spring glory
    Sit useless on the ground
    And await to be crunched underfoot.




    Submitted on 2013-10-09 00:23:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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