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    dots Submission Name: Everlasting Connectiondots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 403
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    dotsEverlasting Connectiondots

    So this is what it feels like when two hearts collide,
    It makes an everlasting connection that won't break.
    A connection that will never try to hurt the hearts,
    Instead it will protect the two.
    Even when things are at there worst..
    Even when all hope seems to be lost.
    This connection keeps them together,
    Keeps there love alive forever..
    Even if they don't know it.
    This is our..
    Everlasting Connection.

    Submitted on 2013-10-09 18:24:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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