I'm going through a break up right now, and I very much relate to the antagonist in this piece, sadly enough. I like the images I get in the second and fourth stanzas. "longevity of pause", "teenager stage" those hit really well with me.
This fits with what my Ex would say so well that I have to refrain from arguing with it. I really like this work, looking forward to check out some others of yours.
Great Job, though the situation that spawned it was crappy.