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    dots Submission Name: The Girl In The Cornerdots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsThe Girl In The Cornerdots
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    The girl in the corner
    All alone
    Why is she here?
    Is she waiting for someone?
    Yes...
    Someone
    To save her
    From all the pain and hate.
    Someone
    To turn to
    In her time of need.
    Someone
    To love her
    When she needs it most.
    Someone
    To be kind
    Not treat her like a ghost.
    Someone
    To be a friend
    Accept her how she is.
    Someone
    To trust
    With all her dirty little secrets.
    Someone
    To comfort her
    When she is sad.
    Someone
    To mourn for her
    When she is dead.
    The girl in the corner
    All alone
    Why is she here?
    Is she waiting for someone?
    Only time will tell
    But in the end?
    We all go to hell...




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