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    dots Submission Name: The Vampiresdots

    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Misc/Dark
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    dotsThe Vampiresdots

    My dreams are but nightmares
    Fear come to life
    Within them I am restless
    Until dawn brings the light
    The golden shimmer
    Of the sun as it'll rise
    And the warmth that it brings
    The warmth I despise
    A creature of the night
    This is what I've become
    In this life of darkness
    I now call it my home
    The sleepless nights
    All go by in silence
    But they will soon
    Erupt with violence
    For the vampires
    You see
    They're hungry
    There's no point in running
    Or trying to hide
    Just give it up
    And accept your demise
    It won't feel like death
    More like a slow fade
    But don't be tricked
    Because we know
    It is us you can't evade
    We are hungry...

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