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    dots Submission Name: Motherhooddots

    Author: BCute
    ASL Info:    30/F/MO
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 1297/1424/373
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       For my baby girl. I've never loved anyone, nor will I ever, as much as I love you. <3

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    Like taking a deep breath
    after so many gasps.
    Being reborn is so simple.
    Just holding your newborn,
    for the first time.

    Makes one realize
    everything was worth it.
    Any miserable moment,
    or horrible thing one
    had to experience.

    Turns into nothing,
    a vague memory.
    Suddenly everything is
    perfect. Its all -

    Bringing blue-eyed innocence
    into a world is the
    greatest accomplishment
    one will ever experience -
    has ever done or will do.

    It's like a clean slate,
    getting a do-over.
    Holding someone so new,
    it's simply becoming.

    Submitted on 2013-10-10 10:09:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I should make my mother read this. These days I could almost think she could care less about how I'm doing or where I'm at....oh well it was beautiful.
    | Posted on 2013-10-10 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]

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