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Author: BCute
ASL Info:    30/F/MO
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Words: 110
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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For my baby girl. I've never loved anyone, nor will I ever, as much as I love you. <3


Like taking a deep breath
after so many gasps.
Being reborn is so simple.
Just holding your newborn,
for the first time.

Makes one realize
everything was worth it.
Any miserable moment,
or horrible thing one
had to experience.

Turns into nothing,
a vague memory.
Suddenly everything is
perfect. Its all -

Bringing blue-eyed innocence
into a world is the
greatest accomplishment
one will ever experience -
has ever done or will do.

It's like a clean slate,
getting a do-over.
Holding someone so new,
it's simply becoming.

Submitted on 2013-10-10 10:09:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I should make my mother read this. These days I could almost think she could care less about how I'm doing or where I'm at....oh well it was beautiful.
| Posted on 2013-10-10 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]

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