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    dots Submission Name: Forced In(Fidelity)dots
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    Author: solararia
    ASL Info:    30/M/Chicago
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 309/335/92
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 713
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    Bytes: 320



    Description:
       Dealing with the aftermath...


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    dotsForced In(Fidelity)dots
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    Here we lie...
    Our hearts exposed
    Open to all
    To whomever will know.

    No will left,
    lust spent long ago
    Wasted it all
    On forever may know.

    Can't forget,
    Sheets forced to and fro
    Holding her close
    Wishing I didn't know.




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