Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Not As Alone As You Would Thinkdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Rhettawolf
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 6/6/17
    Words: 186
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
    Total Views: 523
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1399



    Description:
       Werewolves, animal Shifters, mages (Shifters who can turn into any living thing), werecoyotes, werefoxes, demons, angels, fallen angels, faeries, selkies, the list can go on. If you're Different, please relate.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsNot As Alone As You Would Thinkdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Full moon.
    Forced change.
    Can they maintain control?
    Werecreatures everywhere.

    Forest.
    One different form, I can change when I want.
    Are you a wolf? Or a hawk? Or maybe a snake?
    Shifters everywhere.

    Long, dark blade.
    Starless night.
    Was spit out of the Light and cast out into the Dark.
    Demons everywhere.

    Beautiful and holy.
    The moon is bright.
    The Light is dancing, so wonderful.
    Angels everywhere.

    No stars but it's not entirely Dark.
    No horridness but it's not entirely Light.
    Dark wings, black feathers.
    Fallen Angels everywhere.

    Sometimes you're this
    and sometimes that.
    Shifting endlessly between forms of all kinds.
    Mages everywhere.

    Twirl and spin wheels of silk.
    Wings of transparent gold and silver.
    Follow them and you'll dance to your doom.
    Faeries everywhere.

    Foamy sea,
    beautiful as life itself.
    On land they are humans, but in the water they are seals.
    Selkies everywhere.

    So you see my friend
    you're not alone out there.
    Humans don't rule alone. There're Others out there.
    You're not as alone as you would think.





    Submitted on 2013-10-10 19:38:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    198032

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    In a Corner written by jeniecel
    Mystery Read written by kyserin
    Verse: written by Daniel Barlow
    None the Wiser written by endlessgame23
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence
    going,,,"Skin." written by teika5
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    a leaf of shadow and edge written by Daniel Barlow
    Starseed written by endlessgame23
    Twin Intercept written by Daniel Barlow
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    FamiliarDemons ©™ written by kyserin
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    Night- time written by Daniel Barlow
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    The World written by jjd
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    Deep written by Janesaddiction
    Adoration written by TheStillSilence
    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    The Want written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry