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    dots Submission Name: Liars and Hypocritesdots
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    Author: TheSnoitart
    ASL Info:    19/ M/ USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 53/64/52
    Words: 243
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsLiars and Hypocritesdots
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    The things in this world I most despise
    are the things no one can help becoming.
    Little white lies to save face or feeling
    force of habit forcing a smile.
    Then pointing fingers, spreading the blame
    (not enough butter in the world for that toast)
    thinner than Jell-O liquified against a wall at Mach 2.

    The things in this world I cannot stand
    are the things I find myself doing
    more and more often, sickening myself
    and smiling as I do it. Is anything wrong?
    I smile and nod and hate myself
    then try to blame her for doing the same.
    The world expects me to be all that I hate.
    I oblige, perhaps because now I've got a reason
    to be a cynical asshole.

    So I rant to strangers
    vent in secret, an anon is me
    because I'm afraid what the real people think
    even though I say I don't care.
    Sticks and stones will break my bones
    but words can cause psychological scars.
    I'm fucked, you're fucked, we're fucked
    it's all fucked up
    and I don't even know what I'm talking about.

    Blaze up, fuck everything, and nap
    because maybe
    I can fill this emptiness with
    smoke, or sex, or sleep
    Crank that volume, flying fingers
    TV, Stereo, Xbox, all at once
    it's not loud enough
    inside. Then I look at them
    the degenerates, the scum of the earth
    and realize

    I'm looking in a mirror.




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