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    dots Submission Name: Mistakesdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 5/117/132
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    No matter how hard i try,
    No matter how far i run.
    All because..
    I always make a mistake.
    I have ruined my chances for love..
    I have ruined my chances for happiness..
    I have ruined my chance to live a good life..
    All because..
    I always make a mistake.
    You can't tell me i'm wrong.
    You can't tell me i'm gonna find happiness.
    This life of mine has been ruined.
    This life of mine is pointless.
    All because..
    I always make a mistake.




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