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    dots Submission Name: Darkness is evil?dots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 5/117/132
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsDarkness is evil?dots
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    Everyone is scared of the dark people in this world.
    They are afraid of the bad people in life.
    Without those bad people,
    There would be no good people.
    Without dark,
    There is no light.
    Without sadness,
    Nobody can be happy.
    We all need the darkness,
    We thrive off of getting out of it.
    Without it..
    There would be no reason to live,
    So I ask you this.
    Is a life without being happy,
    A life you wanna live?
    Is darkness truly evil?
    Or is darkness the gateway to the light?




    Submitted on 2013-10-12 10:36:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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