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    dots Submission Name: Blood Smiledots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.45 - 5/115/131
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsBlood Smiledots
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    There is smile that I have now,
    A smile that only comes at night.
    A smile that masks my pain.
    A smile that truly shows my insanity.
    And even though no one will ever see it,
    I keep smiling for everyone.
    This smile only comes when blood rolls,
    Gushes from my body.
    I look myself in the mirror smiling at it.
    This is the pain that only I see.
    This is the pain that only I enjoy to observe.
    This is the pain I deserve to endure.
    I did this to myself and now I have this..
    And this..
    Is my blood smile.




    Submitted on 2013-10-12 23:04:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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