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Lone Wolf

Author: Teofila
ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 210 /104 /71
Words: 170
Class/Type: Misc /Death
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Lone Wolf

You see her
Without her pack
She thinks
I will never go back
I've left for a reason
I shall not return
I can make it on my own
So I'll never go
Back to the ones
I called my family
At one point in time
That meant a lot to me
Now it means nothing
But creatures to run with
Shelter from a storm
A mate to wake up next to
Come the early morn'
I'll set out on my own
Fend for myself
Shouldn't be hard
I'll live like everyone else
Lone wolf walking
Gets a little too curious
One day
Too close to the lights
She layed
Too close to the road
She strayed
Too close to her fate
She came...
The breaks slam
And the tires squeal
The last things she sees
Are the lights, so real
The pain shoots through her
The car has gone
She cries out in agony
To realize she's alone
Poor lone wolf
She died
Along the side of the road...

Submitted on 2013-10-12 23:41:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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