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    dots Submission Name: The Kelpiedots
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    Author: Rhettawolf
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 6/6/17
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
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    dotsThe Kelpiedots
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    Don't stray by the river dear.
    For the kelpie be there.
    Waiting for your flesh and bone to wander too near.
    He may be a charming young man
    with a smile so sweet, it's warming.
    He'll hold out his hand
    and drag you down to the depths to your death.
    He may be a white horse
    So beautiful with his golden saddle.
    Don't climb upon his back
    for he'll drag you down to drown.
    The kelpie
    is not beautiful.
    He lows and screechs all through the 'nigh.
    With his thick, dark hide
    And his teeth of steel
    The kelpie is a sly.
    Don't stray by the river dear.
    For the kelpie be there.
    Waiting for your flesh and bone to wander too near.




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