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    dots Submission Name: Accepting the Failuredots

    Author: Darkwarrior
    ASL Info:    27
    Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 60/63/33
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsAccepting the Failuredots

    It’s hard sometimes to admit a failure.
    To face the person staring back in the mirror.
    To gather your pride, raise your voice
    just loud enough to hear it.
    To gulp down the guilt, the shame,
    regain your spirit.
    To nod silently at your own thought,
    contemplating to share it.
    If I speak it out loud, will I get turned down,
    back away from the challenge and fear it?
    Stumbling can be discouraging,
    especially when running aimlessly
    with no end to adhere it.
    So what if you fall again
    and some stick around in line
    waiting to cheer it.
    It’s the getting back up each time
    that’s worth the caring.

    Submitted on 2013-10-13 20:53:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love honesty and your poem is honest. Keep writing what you are feeling
    | Posted on 2013-10-14 00:00:00 | by nolram | [ Reply to This ]

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