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    dots Submission Name: Everythingdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsEverythingdots
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    Only been one year,
    One year since I met you.
    And in only one year,
    I know you are the only one.
    The only one i will love.
    The only one i have left.
    The only one that i have given everything to.
    And even now..
    Now that were are no longer together..
    Everything is still what you will receive..
    My heart.
    My soul.
    It's all still yours.
    Even if you don't want it..
    And i can only give you one reason why,
    And that is that you are.
    And always will be.
    My everything.




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