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    dots Submission Name: What Kills You?dots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.41 - 5/110/127
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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    dotsWhat Kills You?dots
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    Most people die of disease,
    Or of even accidents.
    Some from murder,
    But not I.
    I am killing myself.
    How?
    Knowing everything that I know.
    I know that i can never be happy again.
    I know that the one i love doesn't love me back.
    I know that I can never be with her again.
    These eat away,
    Not only at my mind,
    But at my soul.
    What do i have left?
    I know the answer to that to.
    Nothing...
    And that's thats all i'll ever have.
    Nothing...
    That's what kills me.
    Now...
    What kills you?




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      Truthful....meaningful....all but the same when realizing reality's own fantasy...and fantasy's own reality.
    | Posted on 2013-11-23 00:00:00 | by Koei | [ Reply to This ]


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