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    dots Submission Name: Nobodydots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/132
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsNobodydots
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    I have always had a feeling,
    Just lingering in the back of my mind.
    I never thought it was true,
    But now i don't see a different explanation.
    An outcast?
    Outcasts are noticed.
    A loser?
    Losers are needed.
    Me?
    I am not noticed.
    Me?
    I am not needed.
    All i am,
    And i will ever be is...
    Just a nobody.




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