Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Nobodydots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 418
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 399



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsNobodydots
    -------------------------------------------


    I have always had a feeling,
    Just lingering in the back of my mind.
    I never thought it was true,
    But now i don't see a different explanation.
    An outcast?
    Outcasts are noticed.
    A loser?
    Losers are needed.
    Me?
    I am not noticed.
    Me?
    I am not needed.
    All i am,
    And i will ever be is...
    Just a nobody.




    Submitted on 2013-10-16 21:00:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    198064

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Etiquette written by saartha
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Carry written by saartha
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    written by Daniel Barlow
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Shi written by ShyOne
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Fasade written by jackz
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Ache written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Love written by saartha
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    untitled written by ShyOne

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry