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    dots Submission Name: Owe it alldots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 5/117/132
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsOwe it alldots
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    My heart
    Burns,
    It stings,
    Deep inside of me.
    My heart aches,
    It bleeds,
    And now see,
    That this pain,
    This fear,
    Was all caused by you.
    I cant breath,
    Death is soon.
    This i know to be true.
    Now all i can say,
    Is thanks,
    This heart,
    Is now gone,
    And..
    I owe it all to you..






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