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    dots Submission Name: My Bladedots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsMy Bladedots
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    This blade,
    My blade.
    Has only felt one person's blood,
    My blood.
    It begs for more,
    I can hear it scream out to me,
    But I cannot let it take control.
    Not again.
    This blade,
    My blade.
    Corrupted my soul,
    And stained my body.
    Darkness courses through this blade,
    But i cannot blame it.
    It is merely hungry,
    Wanting more and more.
    I know though,
    That if i give in to its ways.
    This blade will always be my blade,
    My blade of darkness.
    My blade of torture.
    My blade of...
    Relief...




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