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    dots Submission Name: Your Warrior. My Savior.dots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 5/118/134
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsYour Warrior. My Savior.dots
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    I am forever in you debt,
    You have saved me.
    I know give you my heart,
    My soul.
    Do with it what you want,
    And from know i serve you.
    I am your warrior.
    I will kill anything,
    Destroy everything,
    If it means you will be safe.
    That is all that matters.
    Nothing else is important.
    After all.
    I am merely,
    Your warrior.
    You.
    You are my savior.




    Submitted on 2013-10-20 19:27:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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