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    dots Submission Name: Lovely Thick Crimsondots
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    Author: Rhettawolf
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 6/6/17
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsLovely Thick Crimsondots
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    Drip, drip, drip,
    lovely relief.
    Painful soothing,
    And of life's worth I have no belief.

    This lovely thick crimson
    all over my arm
    is spreading slowly as I fade.
    Yet, I have no alarm.

    Death is waiting
    patiently
    as my empty void they call a soul
    departs without hesitation.

    Oh, lovely thick crimson.
    Oh, who knew?
    That I'd love you so much
    In the wake of my doom.




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