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    dots Submission Name: Heart Stolen, Now Brokendots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/132
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsHeart Stolen, Now Brokendots
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    From the day i met you,
    I knew you were a thief.
    Mainly cause you actually stole from me,
    My heart.
    You stole it without me knowing,
    And i loved it.
    You gave my heart meaning,
    When i couldn't find one.
    And yet,
    You.
    You are the one,
    You are the one who destroyed it.
    Not intentionally,
    But by pure chance.
    I don't think you see it yet,
    Or else i believe you'd stop.
    Or maybe that's exactly what you want,
    For me to cry my life away,
    For me to hurt so much,
    I take this life of mine.
    If only you could see,
    See the pain deep inside of me.
    You.
    You stole my heart,
    But now.
    Now you've broken it..




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