Death is my hero

Author: ForgottenGraves ASL Info:    20, Male Elite Ratio:    0.49 - 5 /121 /135 Words: 47

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Death is my hero

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My blood, Leaves stains.. My scars, Show pain.. My dreams, They died.. These tears, I've cried.. My heart, Is shattered.. This body, Is battered.. This gun, Can send.. My life, The end.. Oh death, Save me.. From this, Cruelty.. You are, My hope.. You are, My hero..

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