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    dots Submission Name: Death is my herodots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/132
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 414
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 431



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    dotsDeath is my herodots
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    My blood,
    Leaves stains..
    My scars,
    Show pain..
    My dreams,
    They died..
    These tears,
    I've cried..
    My heart,
    Is shattered..
    This body,
    Is battered..
    This gun,
    Can send..
    My life,
    The end..
    Oh death,
    Save me..
    From this,
    Cruelty..
    You are,
    My hope..
    You are,
    My hero..




    Submitted on 2013-10-22 23:10:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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