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Death is my hero


Author: ForgottenGraves
ASL Info:    20, Male
Elite Ratio:    0.49 - 5 /121 /135
Words: 47
Class/Type: Poetry /Death
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Death is my hero



My blood,
Leaves stains..
My scars,
Show pain..
My dreams,
They died..
These tears,
I've cried..
My heart,
Is shattered..
This body,
Is battered..
This gun,
Can send..
My life,
The end..
Oh death,
Save me..
From this,
Cruelty..
You are,
My hope..
You are,
My hero..




Submitted on 2013-10-22 23:10:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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