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Author: ForgottenGraves
ASL Info:    20, Male
Elite Ratio:    0.49 - 5 /121 /135
Words: 61
Class/Type: Poetry /Broken
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I have died,
Finally i am gone.
I am now just a body,
Just an empty shell.
My soul.
My heart.
It's all gone.
Neither will come back,
At least that's what I'm told.
Only one way,
One way to fill this body.
My antidote,
My filler.
But for now..
All i am..
And all i will ever be..
Is empty..

Submitted on 2013-10-23 17:12:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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