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    dots Submission Name: Emptydots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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    I have died,
    Finally i am gone.
    I am now just a body,
    Just an empty shell.
    My soul.
    My heart.
    It's all gone.
    Neither will come back,
    At least that's what I'm told.
    Only one way,
    One way to fill this body.
    My antidote,
    My filler.
    But for now..
    All i am..
    And all i will ever be..
    Is empty..

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