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    dots Submission Name: Are Wedots
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    Author: lynn7
    ASL Info:    43/ St. Augustine, FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 419/288/103
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsAre Wedots
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    ARE WE
    Still standing at the river's edge
    Waiting for the courage to cross
    To see what lies on the other side
    Where love lives in the light

    All that we've ever known
    All that we'll ever be
    Can't build a bridge
    Long enough to reach

    Time is running out for us
    As we struggle to decide
    Whether to hide our eyes in darkness
    Or bare our cross in the light




    Submitted on 2013-10-24 14:10:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      "cross" is not bridge?

    Neither is your "reach" to cross. it's english not ebonics.
    | Posted on 2013-10-30 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Will we swim, or become one with the water? Will we sink, or will we stay? And what happens when it all dries up?
    | Posted on 2013-10-25 00:00:00 | by TheSnoitart | [ Reply to This ]
      I guess we'll have to swim. Opulent opacity that's our, cross, we're not translucently existential. We're corporeally preternatural not ethereally sublime.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-10-24 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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