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    dots Submission Name: October 22nddots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.42 - 5/111/127
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
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    dotsOctober 22nddots
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    This day is my favorite day,
    So much has happened on this day.
    I lost my mother this day.
    Exactly one year later,
    I met the love of my life.
    I instantly fell in love,
    Even if i didn't know it.
    She is..
    The most..
    Amazing girl alive,
    Try arguing with me.
    You will lose every time.
    She's is beautiful on so many levels..
    She's smart..
    Kind..
    And never fails to make me laugh..
    But now..
    She has been taken from me.
    Stolen,
    Right from beneath me.
    It is only been one year,
    One year since i met her..
    And i have lost her..
    And it seems,
    At least right now,
    That i will never have her back.
    Years of pain are ahead,
    Especially on this day.
    When i remember everything we ever had.
    And all the pain in between...
    And yet this day is still my favorite day.
    No matter how much i cry..
    No matter how much i want to give up..
    This day..
    October 22nd..
    Will forever be my favorite day...




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